Everything looks goods. The only thing I would suggest is maybe look for more specific dream signs. I find that it's the really odd ones that tend to trigger a DILD. I see my wife in almost every dream because naturally I see her every day. Just seeing her in a dream doesn't do it for me. It's the really odd stuff like, strange things in the sky, people I know are dead, the sun is up at the wrong time, going back to school, pooping in public (yes I know its odd, but that's why it works ) I know my dream signs can't be used for practicing RC's during the day, but I notice them over and over in my non-lucids to the point that I eventually get it the next time it happens in a dream and I'm like, "What's this? This only happens in dreams. Hey I must be dreaming!"

Just a thought. I know you are just getting started and I'm sure the more dreams you recall the more you will notice. Best of luck to ya!