Thread: My Music Songs and Channel

Hey, I listened to your songs, and I think they are good.

You are so good with words. I really have a hard time with that.

I think one thing you can do to embellish your works further is add a counter-melody (not really the right word, since it's rapped, but YKWIM?) on the keyboard, or voice, towards the end of the song (like when you're doing your last verse and chorus or so). Think Depeche Mode - how they layer their keyboard tracks. You might want to add a bridge, although they sound good without them. These ones sound pretty finished, but I think future songs could benefit from a 3rd musical part that is a little bit different from the chorus/verses. Think Beatles, notice how their bridges have a transition chord that is different, yet the music/melody flows to it pretty easily. They are masters of that, and it is my honest 100% opinion that it is the most critical element in song writing. Getting the perfect bridge transition.

Anyways, I am no expert, but I do love writing music. I wish you the best, you have a talent for sure. Keep up your awesome work.