DreamViews Haiku Thread

[Marvo]

Post picture on DV No reply in discussion thread I am ugly

[reci]

Start a haiku thread. Only one person replies. I sure hope for more. Five seven then five Syllables mark a Haiku Remarkable oaf.

[no-Name]

second poster here everything seems fine to me p good thread, Marvo

[Indeed]

I really like this, Although it is annoying. I hope this thread thrives. {I suck at haiku.}

[no-Name]

five in the first line seven in the secondary and five yet again here

[Tyler]

these are not haikus haikus are about nature these haikus are fail

[Invader]

lololololol lololololololol lololololol

[no-Name]

lololololol lololololololol lololololol the best adminv2 forever in our hearts Invader the beast

[Puffin]

Eating M&Ms But now my stomach's aching I ate too many My crap attempt at haiku. I actually am eating peanut M&Ms.

[Marvo]

Exam today I'm doing quite okay Chocolate helps

[no-Name]

I wonder if it's okay to create broken sentences in here.

[Burke]

I think this would be better off in the section the artist's corner

[Surukien]

A penguin in north pole A blizzard around the group A guru eats the soup The penguin goes:"yiieeeehhh"

[Indeed]

A penguin in north pole A blizzard around the group A guru eats the soup The penguin goes:"yiieeeehhh" My dear some-what friend you have way too many lines try haiku again

[Marvo]

What are haikus I'm not even a writer Burke is wrong

[Indeed]

And they all fall down. This is known as gravity. It can be painful.

[Marvo]

ClouD is gone Will the sky ever be normal I hope

[Indeed]

You sir, are correct. Although I cannot tell how. How dare you do this!

[Marvo]

Cloud is back Thought I was a salesman Want to buy a haiku?

[Mzzkc]

Oh Marvo, you fool, Haikus are not hard to write. Why so much failure?

[no-Name]

I don't know where the sunbeams end and the starlight begins all myst'ry

[Mzzkc]

A few favorites. None are mine, but they are great. I love zombie themes: "You are so lucky that I cannot remember how to use doorknobs." "It is hard to tell who is food and who isn't in the nursing home." "Shotguns don't scare me, which explains why I chased him, and why I'm one-eared." "I loved my momma. I eat her with my mouth closed, how she would want it." Zombie Haiku - Ryan Mecum

[Mzzkc]

Did I kill this thread? Maybe no one likes zombies. . . Nah, that's silly.

[Maria92]

Carried away by A moonlight shadow. See you in heaven one day. The caress of lips Whispered words and uttered vows A true tragedy The tongues of lightning Flashing against cold metal The rocket's red glare

[InvisibleWoman]

The Mark wades ever so gently about the dust-- cloaked within darkness.