Originally posted by Placebo
Awaken, he does have a point though
(1) it sounds preachy and cryptic (2) it doesn't have a clearly defined point of discussion, a question or 'What do you think?' would have been nice...
I'll leave this one as is, but just consider it next time please 
We who are of the eternal know that our conscience is clear, and clean of all passed evils.
'We' includes 'you' ? So you're eternal then?
We have pass from death unto Life. [/b]
In what way?
As you can see, it's far from clear what you're trying to say. Maybe we're all a bunch of idiots not to understand you, but at least consider that we might not grasp what you're on about

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