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      A Poem About Lucid Dreaming

      The Clown and the Tree




      As I poured a glass of tea

      I saw a girl with no shoes on

      She danced in the busy, whizzing road

      And collapsed upon my lawn




      She had a subtle gray complexion

      Mud and leaves throughout her hair

      She had moss along her dark, round eyes

      But maintained a piecing stare




      I took a sip of sun-steeped tea

      And looked at her some more

      Then she dug a tunnel in my lawn

      And came up through my floor




      She looked at me and said that I

      Was dead to all I knew

      And all the life I'd had before

      Was dead forever too




      So I looked about my little home

      And in my living room

      There sat a clown who laughed and said

      You'll catch on pretty soon




      I sat and sipped my glass of tea

      But the clown pulled it away

      And said, see here, just stir it more

      We'll have us Cabernet




      Then I heard a rumble from my room

      As the girl climbed through my bed

      She skipped along my hall

      And pranced into my den




      She tried to sit on top of me

      But I threw her from my lap

      Then she thrust her arm into the clown

      And pumped him full of sap




      So I stuck my spoon inside him

      And stirred his blood around

      Then he turned a blackish purple shade

      And belched a drunken sound




      He roared, we must escape her

      We need a faucet and a tub

      So we staggered to the bathroom

      And he passed out on the rug




      I opened up the faucet

      And let the water run

      As I kicked the clownish savior

      To wake him for the fun



      The water grew and waved about

      As the clown dizzily rose

      Then he asked I grab him on the face

      And twist his radish nose




      I turned it like a doorknob

      And his mouth became a door

      I stepped inside and found myself

      Inside a wooden drawer




      Now I paused in all the chaos

      I was dead even before noon

      Then I thought of why I shouldn't

      And grabbed a giant spoon




      I leapt into his mouth again

      Against his teeth my feet did click

      Then we used the spoon I had retrieved

      And beat the water thick




      The tiles began to glow deep red

      And the pool kicked down the door

      Then I saw my home all decked in roots

      And the tree girl dancing as before




      The clown and I swam to her

      With the swelling cabernet

      And while she struggled in the rapids

      Her tender heart fell on display




      I held her as the rushing wine

      Dissipated from the room

      And when she asked why I had saved her

      I said, you'll catch on pretty soon





      (if life was a lucid dream sort of)
      Last edited by jamous; 01-18-2008 at 12:41 AM.
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      thats reallly good... the tone reminds me of something that would come out of alice in wonderland.
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      Quote Originally Posted by lespaulsRcoo View Post
      thats reallly good... the tone reminds me of something that would come out of alice in wonderland.
      thank you

      and ODDLY enough... well, see I wrote this awhile ago, and I think I actually was reading alice in wonderland at the time
      good call! haha

      I can pretty much thank mushrooms, wine, and alice in wonderland for inspiration
      Lucid dreams:
      something like 12 "DILD" method
      something like 4 "DEILD" method

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