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    First Lucid Poem

    by , 03-20-2012 at 02:54 PM (793 Views)
    I awake within the familiar village constructed by my mind through previous lucid encounters. everything is so vivid, too vivid... i become lucid. calm but aware i slowly rise from the wooden bed and approach the door. as i walk i feel the dream slipping so i quickly spin around to keep it going. I open the door and the take in the villiage that i havent seen in awhile. i marvel at the landscape and endless terrain before me thinking in awe of how my mind can conjure this so easily i continue walking through the village completely at peace with the lucid. at this point i remember that my friend had suggested i try and create a poem and submit it for qualification at the lit mag in school, i decided this so as to try something within my lucid when awareness would permit. i pick a door in the village that is a house and decide that when i enter it, there will be a magnificent poem of love waiting for me to remember inside. I approach the door and declare with my forceful intention that if i can create this village, i can create this poem that is awaiting for me on the other side. this took all my lucid experience and focus. i felt the energy pulsating from my chakra points as if materializing every one of my desires.

    the door opens, i step inside to see a regularly wooden home, at the desk i see a chair with a candle lit, and on the table is an ink pen with a parchment attached to it, i approach to witness this remarkable feat, and in my handwriting is a poem titled "us forever" I couldnt believe it was myn but my name was written at teh bottom. i did it, i created a poem to manifest simply by intending it.. i gasp as i read the beautiful lines and attempt to memorize slowly every word. this takes place for some time until i feel the dream start to ripple and my higher-self tells me the time has come to awake.

    i wake up and Jot down the lines of the poem immediately but slowly so as not to falter the tempo at which i did so in my dream. i did this to the best of my degree and to my surprise the poem deemed itself worthy of the school magazine.

    Courtesy of a Lucid dream it went something like this

    Us forever:

    The silence watching patiently
    Two lovers creep into the hollow
    This space entangles energy
    And breaks away their sorrow

    Desperately, she warms the ember
    And cries the tears of rigid truths
    He holds her close, they’ll both remember,
    Fireflies, and endless youths

    The darkness darts down like quicksand
    She looks to him for time
    And reaches through to hold his hand,
    As he softly says your mine
    Come her kiss, his somber sigh
    Brings forth the reaper too
    Last chance for her to touch goodbye, while
    He’s already holding true

    The endless vigor that she shares,
    He’ll die to never miss
    She’ll put to bed, all his nightmares
    As he stops hers with a kiss

    Fragile feelings heal her strong
    His touch is not to far
    She holds to him however long
    As they both grip the same star

    He now withholds tremendous force
    She pulls the final lever
    He changes stride, she alters course
    And whisper, Us Forever

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    Updated 03-22-2012 at 09:11 PM by 49539

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    Comments

    1. Ibis's Avatar
      mhh.. I liked the poem, it was great. I don't know how to describe the feelings you get when you read a fine poem ^-^' but it was really good.
      Good job remembering.
    2. cytotoxicT's Avatar
      Holy crap...thats amazing. That is also tremendous recall. Some painters use lucid dreams to give them unique inspirations too. Great job. I like how it was signed by you already. I should explore something like this.
    3. Omnipresence's Avatar
      Thanks I can say that maybe 60% of the poem was recalled and the rest was inspiration of the feeling of the dream. The reason for this is becaue i have been practicing for years and am at the age where my mind is abosrbing the technique at a good leve.

      I urge everyone to explore this becasue it opens up the creative forces inside you
    4. lucidkara's Avatar
      Thickest of the thick G. I cannot wait for you to enter so that I can absorb some of your lucid influence. Beautiful poem. You've become a master of the astral, you should tap into this more often, create in your lucids and re-create when you wake.
    5. allensig3654's Avatar
      THICKEST OF THE THICK