What kind of things do you listen to as inspiration for this kind of music?
I listened to each of the songs and they all feel a bit repetitive and not very juicy (if you know what I mean). I also might reccommend uploading your music to
www.newgrounds.com to send it out easier. There's also ranking, if you care about that.
My feedback may come off as a bit too critical, but I just see significant room for improvement. Anyway, here are my comments for each piece:
Creation of the Universe - I like the melody that starts around 1:12. The cymbals are a little loud for that part though.
S.F.A. - The rhythm in this is too aggressive for the piece to be relaxing. The melody is alright, but the rhythm moves it away from having a relaxing tone.
Disconnected From The World - The guitar soundfonts in this could use with less distortion. Overall, it feels very noisy and repetitive.
Julia's Autumn Coat - Nice, gentle, piece. Could do well with a little more variation or if it was shorter, as it gets a bit repetitive at times.
Narrative Theme - Has a lot of bass for something so light. Otherwise, not much to say
Expediated Day - Pretty whacky. Sounds like you were mostly just messing around.