http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t-FVHXycRPg

Goes for 3 minutes, so it's short

I need some feedback on this experimental student arthouse style film, it's called "Blackrust" it's basically a visual explosion of randomness, a bit like the ring videotape, but different.

It ends with a suicide sequence. Everything is original and done by only me (except for the actor in the bath-tub and the guy who broke his thumb)

I won at a film competition and it singlehandedly got me into filmschool, but I'd still love some feedback from you guys