I drew a cat...

**panta-rei** · 03-30-2010 04:55 AM

All this praise over an image too blurry to show any flaws...

You did decent, slayer. Average. Attention to detail is what you need to work on. Focus on how the shadows work.

**slayer** · 03-30-2010 05:34 AM

Did you look at the larger image?

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/9093/1000647l.jpg

**Marvo** · 03-30-2010 03:06 PM

You still got some issues with proportions and positioning. I've never seen a person sit/stand like that girl.

Oh and I just realised that its's Tamidoll.

**panta-rei** · 03-30-2010 04:17 PM

I did slay.

**TamiDoll** · 03-30-2010 04:36 PM

Originally Posted by Marvo

You still got some issues with proportions and positioning. I've never seen a person sit/stand like that girl.

Oh and I just realised that its's Tamidoll.

Lol, you're saying I sit funny?! J/K.

**Marvo** · 03-30-2010 08:40 PM

The biggest problem here, compared to the actual photo, is the line on her shoulders. From left to right it should be angled downwards. The way she's currently drawn, it looks like she's hovering above the ground.

You should try working more with drawing just skeletal structures. As you can see on her left leg, you botched that pretty bad. A good way to proceed is actually just drawing her naked, so to speak, and then throw clothes on her and touch things up on your computer.

The line around her shoulder is a little misplaced. Her right shoulder is way too small.

She has no boobs I just noticed.

**slayer** · 03-30-2010 09:49 PM

Thanks Marvo, I probably would never have noticed any of that if you hadn't told me

She has no boobs I just noticed.

I don't really know what to say to this .__ .

**Marvo** · 03-31-2010 12:57 AM

It's a fundamental error, really, since TamiDoll most certainly does have boobs.

**slayer** · 03-31-2010 02:25 AM

I don't want to sound mean, but I couldn't see anything that really showed that they were there. And I certainly wasn't going to improvise...

**Marvo** · 03-31-2010 02:31 AM

What I'm getting at is that the girl looks like a 10 year old.

**TamiDoll** · 03-31-2010 05:08 AM

Originally Posted by slayer

I don't want to sound mean, but I couldn't see anything that really showed that they were there. And I certainly wasn't going to improvise...

Lol it's ok. It's the lighting and how I positioned my body. Hence why my neck, face and chest are mostly in shadow compared to the rest of my body. (That's why those areas look a few tones darker compared to my legs)

Spoiler for Here you can see my chest better lol:

**slayer** · 03-31-2010 09:42 PM

This has turned into a discussion about Tami's chest .__ .

**IndigoGhost** · 04-01-2010 02:16 AM

Originally Posted by TamiDoll

Lol it's ok. It's the lighting and how I positioned my body. Hence why my neck, face and chest are mostly in shadow compared to the rest of my body. (That's why those areas look a few tones darker compared to my legs)

Spoiler for Here you can see my chest better lol:

Hawt.

Originally Posted by slayer

This has turned into a discussion about Tami's chest .__ .

Hawt.

Originally Posted by Marvo

What I'm getting at is that the girl looks like a 10 year old.

Hawt.

Oh wait.... forget the last one.

**spiderlads123** · 04-01-2010 02:25 AM

Originally Posted by TamiDoll

Lol it's ok. It's the lighting and how I positioned my body. Hence why my neck, face and chest are mostly in shadow compared to the rest of my body. (That's why those areas look a few tones darker compared to my legs)

Spoiler for Here you can see my chest better lol:

You put your picture out in the open like that? how Brave! I would be too scared to because there are some weirdos out there. I admire your bravery!

**slayer** · 04-01-2010 02:28 AM

Originally Posted by spiderlads123

You put your picture out in the open like that? how Brave! I would be too scared to because there are some weirdos out there. I admire your bravery!

Especially in a thread by me!

**IndigoGhost** · 04-01-2010 02:33 AM

Originally Posted by spiderlads123

You put your picture out in the open like that? how Brave! I would be too scared to because there are some weirdos out there. I admire your bravery!

Originally Posted by slayer

Especially in a thread by me!

You guys so mean

**spiderlads123** · 04-01-2010 02:39 AM

gasp! how am I mean! I was impressed by her bravery! It's Slayer who's mean!

**IndigoGhost** · 04-01-2010 02:46 AM

Originally Posted by spiderlads123

gasp! how am I mean! I was impressed by her bravery! It's Slayer who's mean!

Your multiple personalities, again

**slayer** · 04-01-2010 02:51 AM

I wasn't being mean. I was calling myself creepy.

I would be too scared to because there are some weirdos out there.

**spiderlads123** · 04-01-2010 02:52 AM

Aw IndigoGhost ! How did you know?! have you been stalking me? Do you like me? Now all th boy are going for me! first Slayer ,now you!

**IndigoGhost** · 04-01-2010 03:03 AM

Originally Posted by spiderlads123

Aw IndigoGhost ! How did you know?! have you been stalking me? Do you like me? Now all th boy are going for me! first Slayer ,now you!

Its because I'm psychic, or it could be i checked your profile, or maybe I'm that purple shadow hiding in the tree outside the window.

You know i totally dig you.

**spiderlads123** · 04-01-2010 03:19 AM

aw! thats so sweet! But I already have a boy friend. Yet I don't mind a stalker at all. In fact I might just dump my old one and take you instead!

But a few problems with you story. one there is no tree by my window. and two, you don't know exactly where i live. It's so cute how ignorant you are. J.K.

**IndigoGhost** · 04-01-2010 03:25 AM

Originally Posted by spiderlads123

aw! thats so sweet! But I already have a boy friend. Yet I don't mind a stalker at all. In fact I might just dump my old one and take you instead!

Yes!

Originally Posted by spiderlads123

But a few problems with you story. one there is no tree by my window. and two, you don't know exactly where i live. It's so cute how ignorant you are. J.K.

Pffft silly! its a cloud tree, its floating in the sky you see?