All this praise over an image too blurry to show any flaws...
You did decent, slayer. Average. Attention to detail is what you need to work on. Focus on how the shadows work.
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All this praise over an image too blurry to show any flaws...
You did decent, slayer. Average. Attention to detail is what you need to work on. Focus on how the shadows work.
Did you look at the larger image?
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/9093/1000647l.jpg
You still got some issues with proportions and positioning. I've never seen a person sit/stand like that girl.
Oh and I just realised that its's Tamidoll.
I did slay.
Lol, you're saying I sit funny?! J/K. :PQuote:
Originally Posted by Marvo
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/766/redlinesarered.jpg
The biggest problem here, compared to the actual photo, is the line on her shoulders. From left to right it should be angled downwards. The way she's currently drawn, it looks like she's hovering above the ground.
You should try working more with drawing just skeletal structures. As you can see on her left leg, you botched that pretty bad. A good way to proceed is actually just drawing her naked, so to speak, and then throw clothes on her and touch things up on your computer.
The line around her shoulder is a little misplaced. Her right shoulder is way too small.
She has no boobs I just noticed.
Thanks Marvo, I probably would never have noticed any of that if you hadn't told me :P
I don't really know what to say to this .__ .Quote:
She has no boobs I just noticed.
It's a fundamental error, really, since TamiDoll most certainly does have boobs.
I don't want to sound mean, but I couldn't see anything that really showed that they were there. And I certainly wasn't going to improvise...
What I'm getting at is that the girl looks like a 10 year old.
Lol it's ok. It's the lighting and how I positioned my body. Hence why my neck, face and chest are mostly in shadow compared to the rest of my body. (That's why those areas look a few tones darker compared to my legs)Quote:
Originally Posted by slayer
Spoiler for Here you can see my chest better lol:
This has turned into a discussion about Tami's chest .__ .
Hawt. :shadewink:Quote:
Originally Posted by TamiDoll
Hawt. :shadewink:Quote:
Originally Posted by slayer
Hawt. :shadewink:Quote:
Originally Posted by Marvo
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/631...tazuna0001.jpg
Oh wait.... forget the last one. :roll:
You put your picture out in the open like that? how Brave! I would be too scared to because there are some weirdos out there. I admire your bravery!Quote:
Originally Posted by TamiDoll
Especially in a thread by me!Quote:
Originally Posted by spiderlads123
http://kyubinaruto.blog.mongenie.com...e/G/396423.jpgQuote:
Originally Posted by spiderlads123
You guys so mean :?Quote:
Originally Posted by slayer
gasp! how am I mean! I was impressed by her bravery! It's Slayer who's mean!
Your multiple personalities, again :PQuote:
Originally Posted by spiderlads123
I wasn't being mean. I was calling myself creepy.
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I would be too scared to because there are some weirdos out there.
Aw IndigoGhost ! How did you know?! have you been stalking me? Do you like me? Now all th boy are going for me! first Slayer ,now you!
Its because I'm psychic, or it could be i checked your profile, or maybe I'm that purple shadow hiding in the tree outside the window.Quote:
Originally Posted by spiderlads123
You know i totally dig you. ;)
aw! thats so sweet! But I already have a boy friend. Yet I don't mind a stalker at all. In fact I might just dump my old one and take you instead!
But a few problems with you story. one there is no tree by my window. and two, you don't know exactly where i live. It's so cute how ignorant you are. J.K.
Yes! :banana:Quote:
Originally Posted by spiderlads123
Pffft silly! its a cloud tree, its floating in the sky you see? :cloud:Quote:
Originally Posted by spiderlads123
Less talk about you guys dating each other more talk about what this thread is really about.
Tami's chest.
This thread is now about catgirls.