Thread: my rap made up on the spot

i am writing this song as i go along want to kill this pain shove my body down a drain wait for it to rain shove it under again in vain killing it before i go fucking insane my brain makes me burn just as i were to learn how to love myself and life it causes me strife..changes joy and love to despair im a brat when i say its unfair do i dare to admit im scared...
better stop or my boss will chop me into little bits...she told me not to cry because everyone suffers in life, on a daily basis, she said i might as well face it..life is a struggle..each day beings new trouble...but even feeling like shit i want to hit her and tell her its bullshit. she tells me the pain never goes away no point trying to stray might as well face the music and realise i will live with this every day hip hip hooray i might as well choke myself and pretend i slipped and fell

the end my friend

Wow, that's awesome! You really have that rhythm going...write another one!

:bravo:

I am such a hater of rap (well not really, just this "gansta" and "hood" bullshit that is cranked out weekly and objectifies women lately), but I must say this is pretty well done.

Originally posted by Joseph_Stalin
I am such a hater of rap (well not really, just this \"gansta\" and \"hood\" bullshit that is cranked out weekly and objectifies women lately)

oh come on you know you love it.

TO THE WINDOW


TO THE WALL

Yo yo yo, this is wasup and I like to drink from cups, my mind is a total blup and I'm in the fo shizzle, later later my nizzle. Hanging in the dope drinking a shope and watching a soap. I like weed and wearing a bead. If you like to nead, talk to me...ad.

I'm a sick rapper too. Fo shizzle.

Originally posted by Paperdoll EP


oh come on you know you love it.

TO THE WINDOW *


TO THE WALL

SKEET SKEET SKEET!

Dave Chappelle's rendition of Lil' Jon is hilariousness to the max.