Thread: My submission for the short writing contest.

Originally Posted by Identity X

It conjures up an image very easily and although short there's some very good snippets in there. So death was his way of escaping his fate?

Yes. This little snippet was a piece of a much larger storyline, but that is the basic idea.

Where I used to write/roleplay, this was considered a medium length post. My usual method of writing is much more extensive, but as I said before, this was the product of sudden violent inspiration and I wanted to convey that. Its more... content than fluff, which I often had in my writing before.

Thanks for your comments ^_^

I can't wait to see the rest!



Now to get more than one paragraph finished.

/cracks knuckles.

Originally Posted by Elis D.

I can't wait to see the rest!



Now to get more than one paragraph finished.

/cracks knuckles.

The rest? That was it, buddy.

At least for the contest.

Yes. This little snippet was a piece of a much larger storyline, but that is the basic idea.

That threw me for a loop I guess. Cool, I like this by itself too.

Originally Posted by Elis D.

That threw me for a loop I guess. Cool, I like this by itself too.

Yeah, I see where the confusion came from.

This was set in a RP called "The reborne". It was pretty interesting but never made it too far. Me and my RP friends decided that the pleasure of roleplaying wasn't worth the time. Besides, all conditions have to be perfect or you waste your whole night, so...

You might see it as a book someday, though.

I like the irony in this piece (the prisoner escapes after all!). It's the perfect length to serve its purpose.

Originally Posted by Abra

I like the irony in this piece (the prisoner escapes after all!). It's the perfect length to serve its purpose.

Thank you. Especially with the comment on the length >.> I think thats what will kill me in the competition.