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      Poetry By Me

      "A Novel Survival"

      Between a wasted scene and an unheard introduction
      The narrator slips in and slips out, unscathed, unharmed
      Leaving behind botched birth, twitching bodies
      A colorless, slightly retarded set of offspring
      Easily manipulated in every aspect of the word
      To no avail, this mass-production attempts to create
      The only sum of its attempts is more and more concrete.
      By every word, by every thought, it furthers its own road
      Such irony rests on the potter's wheel: A self-proclaimed end.
      This congregation has no way past the ruined bridge.
      Their works have always been works of fiction.
      Their lives, mangled and trampled by diction.
      This is the author's abandonment.
      Every page turned is another limb
      Another cry from this unwanted child
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      Sounds like something you'd hear the weird kid at the back of the class read when asked to share whatever he was scribbling down.

      Very vivid, intense mood - I like it.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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