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      Le poetry. :D

      A Beautiful Rendezvous-

      You invoke me,
      entice me,
      as you keep getting deeper.
      This pain that I'm feeling
      gets sweeter and sweeter.

      The words from your lips
      with seduction are poured.
      Your hand on my back
      as I keep saying more.

      The moments are lustful,
      and I can hardly breathe.
      The rush of endorphins
      and longing to please.

      What started off so innocent
      has changed such a path.
      The bonding of bodies
      and conquest of wrath.

      I can't think clearly,
      with emotions erupting.
      Ours bodies in sync
      with the motions of thrusting.

      Your mouth tasting sweet
      through the trembling moans.
      You're treating my body
      like it's something you own.

      You know me now,
      every inch of my being.
      From the moments we've shared
      with pretentious meanings.

      An eruption of feelings
      as my back arches towards you.
      The sweet sensation
      of a lustrous fortitude.

      With stifled breathing
      and sweat dripping dearly.
      Our hearts beating slower
      with satisfactory beaming.

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      Plastic-

      I put the makeup on,
      and I put pound by pound.
      Face looking plastic,
      but it shields the crowds.

      I take the time to listen,
      and I take the time to smile.
      I become an actress
      like an innocent child.

      Beauty is only skin deep,
      but they never knew
      the luggage I have to carry
      just to please you.

      I can spit the lines,
      and make a cheesey grin.
      All the secrets,
      just lie within.

      and I do it....
      I do it all for you.
      Just to please,
      and maybe to help you see through.

      Because frankly,
      it's all I can be.
      Just an actress trying hard
      only to please.

      So just judge me,
      like you say you don't.
      Go on and tell me
      that you really won't.

      Let me hear it.
      All those stupid lies.
      The little lines you'll say
      just to pass the time.

      I've heard it....
      I've heard it all before.
      Maybe this time...
      I thought it was something more.

      Stupid assumptions.
      Dumb thoughts indeed.
      Maybe the mirror,
      is the only one who sees.

      Gotta work for it.
      Play it day by day.
      Trying harder
      only to be pushed away.

      Dumb insecurities.
      They bring you to your knees.
      Trying harder....
      just to finally breath.

      and I do it.....
      I do it all for you.
      Just to please,
      and maybe to help you see through.....

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      Cinderella Doesn't Break-

      You hold me tight,
      make me cry,
      wish I never knew.

      Suffocating,
      with embracing
      Gotta let me through.

      I see the cars,
      passing by
      watching distant lights.

      Dragon flies,
      sting my eyes
      but let all the emotions hide.

      Wisp of wings,
      make it sting,
      make me remember more.

      Give me space,
      face to face,
      It got me feeling sore.

      Can't handle much,
      but I do,
      and I'm about to break.

      Spinning floor,
      seconds pass,
      this moments feeling fake.

      Breathing in,
      it begins,
      nothing like I had ever felt.

      Love me more,
      squeeze my core,
      make me feel the pain.

      Blinded eyes,
      by the moon,
      a sudden kiss of rain.

      Nothing else,
      No fairy tales,
      Cinderella doesn't break.

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      I don't wait. -

      So was it just a game to you?
      To get into my pants?
      Play like you have emotions,
      even just a little bit.

      So did you want me to scream your name?
      Was that what you wanted to hear?
      Did I do it loud enough for you,
      when I screamed it in your ear?

      Yeah the sex was great,
      I could lie and say it wasn't,
      but I won't slander your name,
      because I ain't for it.

      So go on and get your little laugh,
      remember what I had said,
      but bitch at least I was honest with you
      when you laid in my bed.

      Yeah you heard me say it.
      I ain't going to take it back.
      So what if you're good for nothing.
      Shit, it don't make me sad.

      You might have been the best,
      but I can tell you right now.
      It don't take me long to replace,
      so maybe this will help you "figure it out".

      Shit my rhymes may make a poem,
      or even be a song,
      but you won't find anything like me,
      so go on bitch move along.

      Yeah I'll get over you,
      but you'll remember me,
      because baby atleast I wasn't playing,
      when you finally see.

      Shit... I don't wait for ANYBODY.

      Get it right .

      - patience

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      Merciless Game -

      The scandal,
      the heart ache,
      the moments of lust.
      All the lies that your mouth poured
      like poisonous puss.

      You lied to me,
      ridiculed me,
      laughed in my face.
      If only you would have told me
      I could of spared this dark fate.


      But it's over now,
      all that's left is lies.
      Lies on the inside,
      and lies that won't die.


      The stupidity of me
      which I took with such vein.
      I should have realized
      the deception of the game.


      I hope you are happy,
      and your wife never knows,
      because this pain that i'm feeling
      I hate that it shows.


      I wouldn't want her to hurt
      the way you hurt me.
      I wish you would have told me
      of that unGodly unity.


      It would have never happened,
      I would have stayed fair.
      The relationship casual
      the humility spared.


      Those three little words,
      I wish never said,
      those three little words,
      keep running through my head.


      God what a fool,
      a fool of such shame!
      A dumb little girl,
      of a merciless game!


      Well the damage is done.
      I've been brought to my knees.
      I should have known....
      you were only set out to hurt me.

      -patience


      we do it for the lulz...
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      These poems are fantastic Patience! I've already read them on your myspace : P
      My favorite one is A Beautiful Rendezvous


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      Already told you in chat, but very well written. Beautiful Rendevouz would be my favourite too... you know why.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      Very good stuff. I like the first best, for many reasons.

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      Ode to A Best Friend

      Your friendship had brought me back again.
      All those words I wished I never said.
      The time we spent was wasteful,
      Kept us rushing even though unable.

      I thought you'd meant the world to me.
      How wrong I never knew I'd be.
      Give me reasons to unfold
      so I can hide it deeper than before.

      We laughed but neither ever knew
      how fast we'de lose this attitude.
      Same grins and smiles and faces
      getting old and losing patience.

      I really did care for you
      but I can't lose myself to you.
      The backburner is getting cold
      So I'll just take you off my stove.

      Second place isn't what I need.
      I wanted more than what you'de ever see.
      I weaved you in my heart
      only to find out that it's torn apart.

      Damaged goods is what they call it now.
      Even though they're always asking how.
      Want to know my lifetime story,
      never knew they was getting boring.

      I thought you'de hold my secrets,
      but then I noticed I had never let you in.
      I guess it really was my fault
      building up an unrelenting wall.

      I wanted you to get close to me
      but how could you when I refused to part the sea,
      of my past which I never told you.
      Kept you hanging but I never knew the truth.

      I guess it's all my fault somehow,
      pushing away even though I need you now.
      I wish I'd found the key
      to the door to let you see in me.

      My trust was broken so long ago.
      I made you pay for what they did before.
      I shouldn't have put you under pressure
      the paranoia pushed you away even faster.

      So just to make it known
      Here's an ode to you forever more.
      The time we spent was always precious
      and I want you to know I did the best I can.


      we do it for the lulz...
      everyone jump in the roflcopter....
      it's a lulz-a-palooza out there!!

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