Quote Originally Posted by Artelis View Post
It's god awful.
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Try working on keeping an encouraging, positive tone maybe Artelis??

First one was interesting but a bit silly
Second one was... exactly what Artelis says. As was the 3rd.
the sunset one was really cool. Soo much better than the others

keep trying. if you've got a scanner then try doing some art on real paper and scanning it up.
good luck