Okay heres a little more material. You guys can tell me which one you like best or how you think I can edit it to make it sound better... here it goes...

Oh sweet world, oh drunken world,
Who am I but a Drunken girl,
Wrapped up in your sweet embrace,
Lying here in this lovely place,
Where the trees will hug, and the stars kiss,
It will dawn in my soul as everlasting bliss.
Oh sweet world, oh forgotten world,
Who am I but a forgotten girl,
Where the velvet moss shall be my bed,
Where a pillow of flowers will cradle my head,
The moaning wind will mourn my trears,
And the babbling brooks will rest my fears,
The rains will mend my broken heart,
And bond me to this place I cannot part.

Thanx every one!