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    1. 11-21-2005 09:51 AM #1
      Dylan
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      Wasted Time

      Hey, new song here. Called "Wasted Time".. and yeah, the words explain. Finally I put a solo in one of my songs...

      Song.

      Lyrics:
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      son of waves, i sing to you
      swallowed in your tangled quilts of blue
      wading 'round for answers in your tide

      resting in a tree up high
      squinting at the lazy sun's goodbye
      waiting round for views behind the sky

      dododododododododo
      dododododododododo

      wind will come and wind will blow
      run in fields of dancing gold and yellow
      lay in search of breaths that have been lost

      lie beneath the floating dock
      watch the sinking of the drowning clock
      time is better spent when thrown away

      dododododododododo
      dododododododododo
      dododododododododo
      dododododododododo[list]

      Give it a listen please!

      Cheers,
      Dylan
      This is the way the world ends
      Not with a bang, but a whimper.
      T.S. Eliot
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    2. 11-21-2005 09:30 PM #2
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      watch the sinking of the drowning clock
      time is better spent when thrown away [/b]
      I love that line!!!!!!!!! What a great metaphor for the sun setting.
      And it's such carefree thing, such a carefree song

      The chorus and solo are just beautiful.

      Another thing I liked and thought was quite unique was the meter in the 2nd line of every verse. It's just a bit longer than the first line and stretches, making the listener lean in for the rhyme. Me likes.

      You're a very creative songwriter Dylan. I'm still waiting for the CD to come out.....
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