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    1. 10-13-2005 04:39 AM #1
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      Magnetic Eyes

      Hey ok, well here's a song I wrote last night. Called Magnetic Eyes.

      Song here.
      Lyrics here:

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      magnetic eyes
      drawn to the sky
      at least you could try
      but you wonder why
      you're going
      dooooooown
      dooooooown
      dooooooown

      aesthetic lies
      won't help you fly
      just try not to cry
      as you realize
      that you're falling
      dooooooown
      dooooooown
      dooooooown

      cold lullabies
      cut through the night
      just close your eyes
      and say goodbye
      as you're falling
      dooooooown
      dooooooown
      dooooooown
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    2. 10-13-2005 02:56 PM #2
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      Christ Dylan, that was a beautiful song. Again I think you're really genius at nailing a chord progression that really plucks at the listener's heart strings. And your voice is so gorgeous. Bravo dude.

      I'd be interested in hearing what it would sound like if you tried some variations in the repeated verses. Either in the guitar or voice or both. Not a criticism really, rather just curious to see how that would sound.

      Anyway, love your music, rock on!
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    3. 10-13-2005 11:58 PM #3
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      I tip my hat to you, my friend. That was truly excellent.

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    4. 10-14-2005 01:11 AM #4
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      Awww another Dylan masterpiece. I love it hun. Keep the good stuff coming.
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