Thank you jade!

Yeah the skin is too pale. I had to disaturate it because it was more of a mustardy color which didn't look so good saturated, but that was a stupid idea. I should have gone with maybe a pinkish or reddish skin tone which would be fine, it wouldn't really kill my colors, since skin tone here is very light.

Yeah I had to choose between like 6 ways of coloring the hair, involving a purple style and even a green seaweed style!

Also the eyes, I had them hazel color at first lol, but I chose green later when I changed the hair color.
I intentionally made the green strong bcz her eyes are the main focal point and I wanna make them pop, but I'll check if sea green works better.

Oh, here's a flow chart to show you the original pic, it in black and white, and what I did:



Anyways I'm really appreciating your help!

I'll fix it and post the new version.