write a poem that expresses your thoughts and feelings

**saltyseedog** · 02-17-2011 02:48 AM

Write a poem. Just spill what your thinking and feeling. no judgement.

I'll start

The time comes

When I look back on the world

And say

Was it always this dark?

**Tara** · 02-17-2011 03:13 AM

Today I have sat in my chair,
with thoughts of washing my hair.
The day is so slow,
there's no where to go,
I could settle for eating a pear.

**Tara** · 02-17-2011 10:23 PM

A party comes this Saturday
And I am surely proud to say,
I'm awfully excited and giddy to boot!
I'm sure the birthday will be a hoot!

**saltyseedog** · 02-19-2011 01:18 AM

You were crying inside the last time you saw me

One last glance as you drive away

You wake up the next morning

Feeling you cannot live without me

days of sadness

followed by days of silence

**Solarflare** · 02-19-2011 03:03 AM

I find you weird
I find you crazy
I hope you stop
Following me

**~~DeletePlease~~** · 02-19-2011 12:48 PM

Half passed three, I should be
asleep.
Instead I sneak,
Creep,
Lurk DV's community.

I hear a peep of my mother speak,
To my father who's sure to freak,
If he
should see
me
on the PC.

Numbered sheep I should seek, to free-
-ly enter deep sleep.
Instead I keep with this seep-
-age of "eeps".
...
Maybe
Two or three
More peeks
At these DV artistes.

-----

Now repeat
Three
Times with speed.

EDIT: Mom saw me just as I was about to get off. Stealth fail. :[

**saltyseedog** · 02-20-2011 01:59 AM

When we come together

Our heart remember

The life we shared

In which

We killed so many innocent poeple

Our souls are tortured by guilt

**Solarflare** · 02-20-2011 03:22 AM

It is almost night
And I excitedly await
The Lucid Dream I will have
The Lucid dream I desire
The lucid dream I crave
The lucid dream that will make me complete
That.... is what i humbly await...

**Xox** · 02-20-2011 04:23 AM

I am
Just
open.

**Spartiate** · 02-20-2011 04:52 AM

^ lol teenager

**ooflendoodle** · 02-20-2011 05:06 AM

I got out of the river
I'm soaking wet though
I might go back in

**saltyseedog** · 02-20-2011 05:42 AM

A lonely soul

In a world of shadows

tortured by darkness

The emptiness pierces my heart

Longing for a place of comfort

I sit in the darkness

waiting

miserably

**Solarflare** · 02-20-2011 03:06 PM

Originally Posted by saltyseedog

A lonely soul

In a world of shadows

tortured by darkness

The emptiness pierces my heart

Longing for a place of comfort

I sit in the darkness

waiting

miserably

Your poems aren't the happiest are they........

Anyways here's mine

My mouth drools
My mouth is angry
he awaits
the pizza party to begin ^-^

**saltyseedog** · 02-20-2011 07:44 PM

Sorry my poems express how I feel... I don't feel like living in delusional happiness

**NobleDreams** · 02-20-2011 07:58 PM

Okay, now I will hold on
And I will hold on till I forget how it felt
To remind myself to hold on
And till I question:
Was it really necesesary anyways?

It's not that my life's bad
No, not at all
I just struggle with my illusionate misery
From the world of nowhere
Till I become happy again
Livin' in this wonderful rollercoaster
'Cause when I think about it.. I like it!

**Xaqaria** · 02-20-2011 08:10 PM

once a fish,
swam where was wish'd.
Now a man,
stuck where I stand.

**saltyseedog** · 02-20-2011 08:30 PM

If you had to fight for your life today, would you survive?

You act as if you wil live forever

In your comfort zone of false fulfillment

**saltyseedog** · 02-20-2011 11:06 PM

You looked to the earth and the sky

Trying to understand

You got it all figured out

You think you know everything

But you do not understand

Inside you

There is something you ignore

Your awareness of yourself

The fire burning in your chest

Stuck in your fog of your mind

You cannot see this

Your mind controls you

Distracts you

From seeing the pain

**Tara** · 02-20-2011 11:44 PM

Sitting in bed,
an ache in my head.
I read of snails
and long for the trails.
My poems rhyme
all the time.
Holy jeez, dude -
I could use some food.

**fairytale complex** · 02-21-2011 01:14 AM

nautica
the matrix
lord of the rings
i want that hat
from the lincoln highway

**NobleDreams** · 02-21-2011 05:04 PM

If yesterday never was
and tomorrow would never be
could that mean that
we would be free?

**ooflendoodle** · 02-21-2011 09:08 PM

breakfast left
me feeling
quite content
I'll see
them again
at five

**acatalephobic** · 02-22-2011 01:07 AM

your "love" is rotten.
i'm sad that i gave to you
the best that i had.

...and all you ever gave back were vices, bruises, and heartache.

Crappy poetry aside, I think I needed to get that out somehow.

**Solarflare** · 02-22-2011 01:13 AM

poems don't have to be vague you know........

I am sitting
Not doing much
Sitting on my laptop
Writing this poem

**tommo** · 02-22-2011 04:09 PM

Originally Posted by saltyseedog

You looked to the earth and the sky

Trying to understand

You got it all figured out

You think you know everything

But you do not understand

Inside you

There is something you ignore

Your awareness of yourself

The fire burning in your chest

Stuck in your fog of your mind

You cannot see this

Your mind controls you

Distracts you

From seeing the pain

I did not want to thank this
Coz your thanks were 69
That euphemism never gets old
It will last for all time

Moving away were our thought filled eyes
Gazing in to one another's as machinery wrenched us apart
One cannot overpower the machine
But I will never forget
And you will never forget

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